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The Cat by Me

Posted by 3DPitDudez - June 10th, 2013


The other news post was just something stupid because I was bored. Now, I said I would post stories on here, so I shall. The story is called, The Cat, and my friend gave me an idea to make a story like this. So, just read it and like it dern it!

Here we go:

It was there. Standing in my backyard in the cold rain, surrounded by the daises and small trees near the garden. It was morning, and I just woke up, with my peace interrupted by that sight. That small furry figure in the backyard, not doing a single thing while cold rain poured on it's black fur. It is not normal to see a it just standing in the rain, not doing a thing! Creatures like it would always be on the move, prowling around this dense world of ours, and would panic if it gets wet.

That thing would always appear in my backyard in the morning of Monday. Just standing near the garden anyway doing nothing. I have to do something now, it's just too freaky and strange to see that every Monday morning.

I told my mom about this and she said that I should ignore it, not to do a single thing to that black furry creature. She said that its just a regular animal and its just doing what other animals do, and she is really wrong about that. I just told her that I would be outside, chilling with my buds. So I went outside, into the backyard.

The rain started to turn into drizzle, and I didn't bother wearing a jacket, or hold an umbrella. The clouds were dark grey once I looked at the sky, giving my day something dull and calm. But walking up to this thing made my day chilling and spooky. Every two feet I walk, the more it turns it's head, alert and ready to jump at me any minute.

Standing three feet away from it sent chills to my spine and my instincts told me to not get any closer. But out of my sanity, I stepped one more foot before I wait for it to respond to my presence. The thing turned it's body to me, baring it's fangs and sapphire glowing eyes glaring at me. The creature had scares all over it's face, almost making it look like a complete beast, and it might have got into many fights by the looks of those bloody marks.

Once i'm close to it, the size is what surprises me the most. By the size, it was just a baby, about five months old. Poor creature, and it bares so much beauty from the back. A black feline with sapphire eyes, but it sends a strange feeling that it might be abnormal.

Out of my sanity, I reached my arms out while I was on my knees, trying to welcome it to my warmth and kindness. It rejected and started to back away slowly, and red substance started to drop from it's mouth. It ran down it's neck, and started to drip on the wet green grass. I pulled my arms away and my mind began to tell me that I should run, not to look back. I got up on my legs and carried my feet swiftly near my house. When I looked back, the creature was gone. I stopped and looked around the backyard, confused of where it went. I shook my head and turned my head to the house. It was there, four times larger than the regular size I encountered, showing bloody sharp teeth at me. The most shocking thing that came into my view was that it's eyes were bloody red, telling me I would be meeting death soon...

End, tell me how this sucker is, and if i'm not feeling too lazy, i'll write more!


Comments

This story is awesome XD.

Thanks, and the dude actually dies

This was really good. Write more. I love reading NG users stories.

Thanks! I'll write more, i'm sure