Alright, this is a re-write from my other story, " The Funhuji Brothers." And thank you kkots for the feedback from the story. I will head for a humor type story instead of mystery. I'm not going to get readers and myself confused. Maybe that's why I didn't get much feedback on the story. There would be changes compared to the Funhuji Brothers. But the personalities of two characters would be the same as the ones from the brothers in my other story.

I'm going to delete my other story, and I just deleted my post from yesterday. It's just something stupid because I was bored again. And Kisame, stop posting crap on my news if you're going to be a dick about it. It was you that almost made me want to leave NG forever. The situation is handled anyway, so you won't post anymore things on my news posts.

Last, before I bring up the story, I want to thank some Newgrounders for being great friends and fans.

Ladibug, SexyFurryGal, ShortyLong, Reuven, blauwolkje92, supergandhi64, kylethekidrs, and keke124!

Agh, now for the story!

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The Cattunko Brothers Part 1!

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Characters (Well, Some)
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Shiyu- The older brother in the Cattunko family. He is 16, and he has brown hair, hazel eyes, and he is always wearing a hoodie and jeans. He has major issues with controlling anger and such, and he can be very sensitive and would cause fights with his brother and other people. But, he stills cares about others when he is not acting arrogant and obnoxious.

Zucole- The younger brother in the Cattunko family. He is 13, and he has brown hair and blue eyes, and he likes to be creative with his clothing. He is very laid-back, calm, and he tends to follow his brother's footsteps sometimes. He is also very kind, but he can snap if he gains too much stress.

Funisal- He is the middle aged brother in the Cattunko family. He is 15, and he has black hair, and hazel eyes, and he likes to wear gothy clothes and ones in dark colors. He is a clean freak, and he can be ignorant and unpredictable sometimes. He is very quiet most times, but when it comes to situations between the brothers, he is the first to make mistakes.

Dunion- He is a creeper, and he is always following the brothers for no reason. He is 10, and he has blonde hair and brown eyes. There, that's enough info, he's just a creeper.

Runyuio- She is the brother's friend, and also someone who watches over them to make sure they don't get into a lot of shit. She is 17, and she has black hair and scarlet eyes. She likes to wear rockstar type clothing, since she plays in a band called the Oreo Crushers. She plays the drums, and she hits one of the brothers with a drum stick if pissed. She is alert, fussy, and kindhearted at least.

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The brothers were in the park, sitting on a bench, and relaxing in the sun before the rain pours. It was midday, and the park seemed quite empty. Wide open spaces, lakes, and flower beds with their fragrance lifting all the time. The trees with bright green leaves, and were shaking violently when the wind strikes them. The park would always be filled with those germ carrying, little tiny bastards who would run around and-

" Hey Zucole, Shiyu, I think we're being watched again." Funisal pointed to a bush across the playground, and turned his head to see if they got their eyes caught on the figure in the bush. Shiyu grabbed a rock under the bench and threw it at the bush, " Take that, you piece of shit! That's what you get for spying on us! Creeper..." Zucole jumped up from the bench and waved his arms in panic, " Shiyu, why the hell did you do that?! He could be injured right now you baka!" Shiyu crossed his arms behind his back, " It's that creeper kid! He deserves that for being creepy as hell, always watching our every move!" Zucole shook his head," Well that doesn't mean you throw a rock at him! You just walk up to him and tell him to stop doing what he is doing!" Shiyu sat up and sighed. He forced his legs to pick him up and carry him to the bush.

Near the bush, he saw a kid with a bleeding head knocked out on the grass. Zucole and Funisal caught up to Shiyu and saw the knocked out bleeding blonde kid. " That's a lot of blood. We should take him to the hospital," Shiyu looked around the area," but I wonder...where the hell is his parents?" Funisal picked the kid up and shrugged. Zucole facepalmed and groaned, " I still can't believe you did that. You should really say sorry once he awakes." Shiyu made his hand move to make fun of his blabbering mouth while he talked, not knowing he was just staring at him doing that after talking. Once Shiyu saw an angry Zucole, he hurried and put his hand down.

" Right, now let's take him to the hospital in Fron Street." Shiyu had a head start, and the other two caught up to him near the street. Behind, was an empty park, quiet as a moth, and above was a grey sky, with clouds dancing and moving freely.
Only if there were people in the park, only to bring some brightness in the sky.
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Continued, and there would be more characters, and I'll put Runyuio in the story soon enough. Tell me how the story is so far and if you have questions, let me know and I'll make changes in the story.