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The Cattunko Brothers Part 2

Posted by 3DPitDudez - June 30th, 2013


Sorry about the long wait, it was because I had a major headache, and it kept me absent for a couple of days. But i'm better now!

And I might be busy this week, so this post might be the only one for this week. That's a big might right there, because...

Monday- I might be able to go on NG

Tuesday- Laundry day, sucks balls

Wednesday- Cleaning my blasted room day

And, Thursday through Sunday, I will be at my Grandparents house

Okay, now for the story. Note! Runyuio will be in this part, along with other characters. Alright, enjoy!
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What happened- The brothers were hanging out in an empty park on a nice cloudy morning. Shiyu, the jerk, threw a rock at Dunion the creeper, after Funisal pointed out that they were being watched. Zucole complained to shiyu at what he had done, and now they are heading to the hospital with a bleeding Dunion.

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" Hey miss, can you help us? This kid is hurt badly!" Shiyu, Zucole, and Funisal were standing in front of a nurse near the entrance of the hospital, waiting for the nurse to answer. The nurse looked at Dunion with shocked eyes and snatched him from Shiyu's arms, " Oh my goodness! How did this happen?" Shiyu, Zucole, and Funisal whispered a bit before letting Funisal answer. " He got hit by a truck! He needs help right away!" Shiyu giggled after a fib was told, and Zucole slapped him behind the head, " Shut up!" The nurse nodded and gave a warm smile, " Bless you boys for helping this child. I think his parents would be worried sick! Or, maybe you could be his relatives?" The boys shook their heads and Shiyu said, " No, we are just people who helped him out."

The nurse set Dunion on the wheelchair, and the boys watched as she rushed to the emergency room. The boys watched until the door closed and Shiyu started laughing, " Oh my god, if we told the truth, I could imagine the face and the response!" Funisal joined in, " What the hell is wrong with you teens?! Why would you do something like that?!" Funisal imitated the nurse's voice while saying that, and Zucole groaned and slapped his head in misery, " Oh brother..."

" Hey guys! Surprising seeing you here!" The boys turned to the waiting room, seeing Runyuio get up from a seat and walking up to them, " So, why are you here?" Shiyu rubbed behind his head, " Well, this kid got hit by a truck, and in the state, we decided to help him out." Runyuio clapped her hands together and smiled, " That's so nice of you guys to help! Usually you guys would just walk away from a situation like that. But I won't see Zucole doing that. I know how you are dude." Zucole chuckled, " Yeah, you're right. So, why are you here?" Runyuio blinked and pointed to a lady, around her forties, sitting on a wheelchair. " I came to check on my aunt Dollyhu, she has been staying in the hospital for months now. It's best I give up my band practice for today and check on her." Shiyu looked at the lady for a bit, and turned his attention back to Runyuio, " So, what's wrong with her?" Runyuio placed her hands on her hips, " A virus." Shiyu and Zucole nodded, and saw that Funisal is talking to some random nurse near a counter. When did he butt out from the conversation?!

Shiyu walked up to Funisal and dragged him away by the ear, " Ow ow ow ow ow call me somtime, ow." Was all he said while being pulled away from his latest catch. Shiyu mumbled angrily, " When we are having a nice conversation, you have to join in too instead of picking up chicks 24/7! You hear me you sneaky womanizer?!" Funisal rolled his eyes, " Yeah, and it's a good thing I can dig chicks, unlike you." " Shut up!" Shiyu walked up to Zucole and Runyuio, and released his grip on Funisal's ears. Zucole was happy now that his two foolish brothers are back. He quickly spoke when everyone was silent enough, " So...now that you guys are here, shall we get going?" Shiyu folded his arms, " Yeah, we have an ass load of crap we need to do at home, like chores and cleaning our rooms. Talk to you later Runyuio! " The boys waved and Runyuio waved until the boys left the hospital, leaving her concerned. She thought, " I wonder...how did the kid get hit by a truck in the first place and actually survive!? And, who was he? Wasn't he suppose to be with his parents when he was outside?" Runyuio shook her head to clear the thoughts, " Oh well, maybe the boys could explain all that when I meet up with them again."She walked back to the waiting room, and reunited with her aunt.
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The boys walked into the kitchen and opened the fridge, something they always do after going out and chilling outside. It was noon, around 1, and the boys grabbed some sandwiches from the fridge before closing it. " Where were you boys?" The boys quickly set the sandwiches on the counter near the sink, and turned to their mother, stomping her foot near the kitchen entrance. The boys stood still and Zucole raised his hand up after ten seconds, " We were...chilling in the park until we saw this kid getting hit by a truck. We hurried and rushed him to the hospital after that. That's why we took so long." The mother fixed her dark brown hair and then sat on a chair near the yellow table the boys don't like much, " Oh goodness, I sent you guys out there to get some pineapples and strawberries for my pie. You boys probably forgot. But I am thankful for helping someone in need. For that, I will go ahead and get the things I need for the pie." Shiyu, Zucole, and Funisal all blurted out, " That's okay, mom! We can get the stuff right now! Don't worry!"

The mother got up from the chair and giggled, " No that's okay, now you boys relax after all the trouble-" " No, it's okay!" Shiyu interrupted, " You can start making the pie right now, we would get the stuff you need!" The mother gave in and started to get the ingredients out for the pie, " Alright, you boys can. I knew you can be my helpful sons someday. You guys are starting to be more responsible! Like you should be." The boys smiled and grabbed their sandwiches from the marble counter. Shiyu knocked Funisal's sandwich in the sink before he could grab it, " Hey! You jerk!" Funisal furiously grabbed the sandwich and threw it in the trash. He got a new one and followed the boys towards the front door. He punched Shiyu, and it stopped his laughing. Shiyu punched back and Funisal tried to start up a punch fight. Shiyu shrieked and ran out the door, making a chase for Funisal. The two were running around the frontyard, crashing into the daisy beds and fence, and they left Zucole rolling his eyes and sighing in misery.

Continued! And remember my announcement above! A busy week ahead for me, especially when the 4th of July is coming up! I will enjoy that.

Oh yeah, and write your feedback. Whatever is wrong, I will fix. But, I think I pulled off great in this part.


Comments

This is too ordinary. You're writing everyday life we all have (which is plain and boring). You're writing about chit-chatting, sandwiches, moms, pies, more talking, chatting, etc. Nothing interesting happened. After reading the first part I expected something important/unordinary/mind-blowing to happen. Now I'm very disappointed.

The excitement happen eventually, the story is just on it's rising action this moment. I just want to give it a slow, easy going start with little problems and crap before crazy shit happens. The next few parts will be exciting, and things will start to change in the next part.

So be very patient my friend! The story will get better!